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Really enjoyed reading this one, and one of my favorite designs to come out of the One-Page Weekender this year. The combination of your type choice and the Robinson illustration centered grant it a certain elegance that compliments the tone and reminds me of my favorite fairytale books growing up.  

I wanted to give You changeling thing some time to sit before I came back and wrote my thoughts. So hey, here they are!

The family table is great. You give just enough to spark player's imagination with their names and roles, my favorite being Smith the former shipmate as the furthest outlier from the family. Big fan of the limited (but very intentional!) selection here.

The leading questions at the end of each journal entry toe that line of open but inherently tense that I really dig in a TTRPG. Very few feel like they'd be clear cut yes or no answers, and even those that are (like "were you near enough to overhear / were you observed") lend themselves to nuance with the unnatural insight potentially elaborating on them. Even if you lose an insight, the potentially vague implications of a journal moment carry momentum into the next. 

It's all very clever, and I'm a big fan of the confident, knowingly restrained writing. 

Looking forward to reading more of your work :)

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Thank you so much for such a thoughtful and kind review! The constraints that one-page games bring with them really gives us permission to make a very narrow experience – they don't need to to work in every possible situation or for every player or for campaign-length play. And so when they connect they connect, and I love that.